After the Mindless Death

Out of the blue, I should think, this poem is.

Let the demons in my mind grow

The darkness is swallowing me

Tell me something I don't know

I could just go crazy

The light blinds my blackened eyes

The cancer is suffocating my soul

No one can hear the desperate cries

I could just go dull

Let the wind carry me to death

The thorns are crushing my brain

As I let out my very last breath

Just remember, after my death

Nothing will be the same

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Just remember, after my death
Nothing will be the same"
I like the above words. I tell people. Dead mean. All things did and didn't don't matter anymore. Nice flow of thought lead to a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chidoriflower]

Thank u ^0^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Moving and thought provoking. A few lines puts life into perspective. Good write.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you.

[ron]

Very powerful write. The last line reminds us that we are all special and have meaning. Great poem

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you. :)

[ron]

You are most welcome :)

[Bluefire]

Mind blown.
That last line hits hard like a kick in the ribs to wake you up and send you off into an intense thinking daze.
Very well done!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you very much. :)

[Bluefire]

No problem. =3

[Angels heart]

Don't give up, whatever your going through, don't give up!!! I love this poem, I can fell your feelings through this poem, at least I hope I am interpreting them right. What a dork I can be. Death can sometimes be more welcoming than life.

[Chidoriflower]

That's what I was shooting for. Hm. Dorks are adorable. Which means you are. ;D In this plane, I suppose we view something as mysterious as death as...some kind of release? I dunno. Thanks for the review! :)

[Angels heart]

Flirt. Sometimes life gives you lemons and they are too sour for people to enjoy so they just throw them away. No problem, love to review your poems xD ;)

[Chidoriflower]

I can't help it. ;) Hm....I wish I could take those lemons and make a tart, no matter how sour. Life, I think, is meant to be enjoyed. Death is something like a prospective dance...overly romantic...lol I like your reviews. xD

[Lucifer Jones]

It does have a fast, spontaneous feel... a tremor behind the words if you will. I love it. Very nice work.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you very much, Mr. Jones. :)