Tough Love

*sigh*....

Bam-I would punch you, just so you could regain your senses

I'd walk on the dangerous side of the sidewalk

And I'd send messages to strangers, so I could find out if you're okay

And then call you an idiot

If anything tears you apart, or kills you

I'll be there, even if I don't know what to do

I'll just be screaming,

I love you. 

Author's Note

A bit out of the blue, this writing is, and probably too personal for me to "publish."

Reviews

[Miranda Richard]

Poetry is about being personal, and once more I'm so glad you decided to publish. Another lovely piece :)

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Personally if it was me I would Publish
it but then I am a Romantic with
my writes or what ever
comes to me I write this is very blunt and
So much Emotion But I really love this.

I thought I would Check out your Writes
I am friends with Bluefire and
I saw you on her page thought
your work might be interesting to read.

Blessings



If anything tears you apart, or kills you

I'll be there, even if I don't know what to do

I'll just be screaming,

I love you.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you.

[Rose of many colours]

GREAT LINES ,IT SPEAK VOLUMES.THOUGH IT IS SHORT iT IS UNIQUE. GOD BLESS

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you! God bless you, also. ^^

[Rose of many colours]

You are welcome

[Sami Khalil]

"If anything tears you apart, or kills you

I'll be there, even if I don't know what to do

I'll just be screaming,

I love you. "

A very good write. I like those lines the most...:)

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, I appreciate it. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Lucifer Jones]

Wow... that was absolutely great! I only truly enjoy reading when it evokes emotions in me... and that was just great! Thank you.

[Chidoriflower]

Thanks for reviewing! :D

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You’ve got a fascinating premise here, and even more fascinating implications.

[Chidoriflower]

Thanks? o.o