Realization

Under your hand, through the darkness of the rain

After the pain, after the sadness, I'll never feel the same again

Somehow, somewhere, I've gained that lost and forgotten light

You guided me, and showed me what was right

The doubts and weight drag me down in full

I'll have to put up with my emotions and bull

In this worry, I beg for some kind of sweet release

Distrust, and dishonesty gives me no peace

My strength is not sufficient, my knees are weak

I can't hold my own, even though I'm not even meek

I'll sing till I can't breathe, through the darkness of my soul

I will tear it apart, and put it back together, and make it whole

I don't know where to start, so I may start from the beginning

Reviews

[Horizons]

Such kinda pieces come from the heart when someone's in love of someone. So, may be i think you've passed through your pain you got from love. Every line's creative and well structured into the great words. I loved two lines.. where you've talked about Peace and Honesty ... yes, it's true, honesty'll never give you peace and your peace'll cut your honesty into piece (s). I felt the poem from heart. Nicely written.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you; I greatly appreciate it.