The Sun

The sun has risen

After the night of death and pain

Light has returned

Reviews

[ron]

So much in so few words. Very well penned.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you.

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Caradoc]

I sense much hope in this short piece. And relief. And yet this could also bring with it a harsher reality, as the light of day reveals the full extent of the ugliness that the night kept hidden from the eyes.

Depressing, I know, but I tend to look at multiple sides of a story. And that means this one has much complexity in its three short lines.

For that, I say well done.

-Caradoc

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much, Caradoc! :)

[Chidoriflower]

How insightful and refreshing.

[Caradoc]

You are very welcome. :)

[Horizons]

Lol, Inspirational short poem :) I enjoyed it. I felt how much you love the value of everything in the life. That's great. It's a write which tells us to move on always on the pavements of life without any pain and affection of love because if you want to live life freely, you've to analyse the beauty of life how worth it keeps in the life. That's all i got.. i really loved this. An Interesting Imaginary :)

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Hatchling]

I like it!!!!!! Keep up the great work :D

[Chidoriflower]

Thanks! Btw, I love your profile picture! Fluttershy is so pretty! :)

[Hatchling]

You're welcome. Thank you

[Akashi]

I read this..................................

[Chidoriflower]

I knew you would hardly say anything, Akashi-chan. I just knew it.

[Akashi]

You must know me, Chidori-san, far too well. ;)

[Chidoriflower]

It is a curse. -.-

[Akashi]

Muahahahahahahahahahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Chidoriflower]

BLAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!!!

[Akashi]

shut up -__-

[Chidoriflower]

YOU SHUT UP

[Akashi]

I'm not gonna shut up until you shut up. shut up.

[Chidoriflower]

I will never shut up. Never.

[Akashi]

Me neither.

[Chidoriflower]

I will get the last words.

[Akashi]

No you will not.

[Chidoriflower]

Yes I will.

[Akashi]

NOPE-YA-DOPE!

[Chidoriflower]

YEEEEEES I WILL!!!!!! :D

[Akashi]

No you will not. No you will not.

[Chidoriflower]

Don't tell me what to do, bakka!

[Akashi]

Anata bakka-des.

[Chidoriflower]

D:..........

[Akashi]

Yups... I just d-ed yo face!

[Chidoriflower]

D-ed? Is that some kind of derogatory statement?

[Akashi]

No. It's pronounced: DEEEEEEED.

[Chidoriflower]

DEEEEEED? That's not even a real word.

[Akashi]

Whatever. This is the modern America, ya herd?

[Chidoriflower]

That's not a good enough excuse to use incorrect language.

[Akashi]

Aw whatever. Anyway I am saying the last words!

[Chidoriflower]

No! YOU WILL NOT DEFEAT ME!

[Akashi]

Well I haven't seen you winning.

[Chidoriflower]

Technically, neither of us are winning. Also, you have to put a comma after "Well."

[Akashi]

Whatever. You're not my boss.

[Chidoriflower]

You sound like a three year old.

[Akashi]

You sound like a fifteen year old.

[Chidoriflower]

That's because I am a fifteen year old. I don't think you are three.

[Akashi]

I feel younger already....

[Chidoriflower]

Yes, good for you.

[Akashi]

Yups. Good for me.

[Bluefire]

Purrtty!
A happy ending,
I like it! :3

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you missy!! :D

[Bluefire]

No problemo. :3