Economic Reflection

Just a little thing I made up, out of the blue. Solely for the American, if you understand our economical problems.

So, we're in debt

No need to cut

The budget's not met

We're stuck in a rut

Twinkies are dead

And politicians don't care

It all hurts my head

Are the citizens aware?

Reviews

[Azriel]

lovely piece, short and simple but quite effective...

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, Azriel!

[Akashi]

Nice... Do you actually think Twinkies were ever alive? If they were, then that would mean vegetarians would never eat them, duh. But, I guess politicians don't want to get fat on Twinkies, they want empress their voters with their beautiful shape. Have a nice day!

[Chidoriflower]

Haha. Yes! Twinkies were alive! They farted sparkles. Politicians wouldn't fit in suits. Don't tell me what to do. YOU have a nice day! :D

[quinfinn]

oh, we are painfully aware! and this is a solid write but in response to herman caine's approach all i can say is nein! nein! nein! that would have been a disaster for the very poor. nice write!

[Chidoriflower]

Yeah....it is painful. There is always flaws in politician's plans, but I am ignorant of those kind of things. D: Thank you for stopping by! I highly appreciate your review! :)

[quinfinn]

always study your politicians and choose the lesser of two evils....they are all corrupt. and you are welcome

[Kenneth The Poet]

Yeah, but what can we do about it? I've pondered that for a long time. Great piece, the rhyme and rhythm are sublime.

[Chidoriflower]

So have I. I thought Herman Cain's approach might've been interesting, no matter how "childish" it seemed. (The nine-nine-nine plan.) Thank you so much!

[Kenneth The Poet]

No problem.