Cold Black Prius

Yet another poem.

You got no sleep last night; were you entwined in my dream?

The moon whispers silent soothing words, silver rays in your room

I've slipped up, stumbled, but you lifted me up and crashed me down

Love, it is always dirtied, what the hell does it mean

Any time you enter a room, it lights up, it spells out my doom

A head held so high, vanity stained me, you broke that crown

Obsession drove me to insanity;lust starved my soul

You fueled that fire, took me from selfish cocky purity

The inner wolf ignited red-hot flames, tearing innocent flesh

Shock me, enter inside of me! The lighting spasms me whole!

A new arrogance stack atop a crest, a new surety

You may satisfy desire, but my heart is paper mesh

Bells tinkle in the distance, a hare stomps his foot

Blood scabs on a hurt knee of a girl, she grabs a sandwich

Sigh, because somewhere, maybe someone, is dreaming

Of a black Prius, freezing cold

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Like the opening of a coming-of-age movie.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you! I honestly appreciate it!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not a problem at all.

[RachelReaper]

What I like most about this poem is your writing style, you have a different way of writing than most, because at the end you left it open-ended, so we can interpret it how we want and what this means to us. Great job here!

[Chidoriflower]

I highly appreciate your review! :D I also enjoy your way of writing, it's so fluid, exciting, funny, and original. YEAH!!!!

[RachelReaper]

yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Chidoriflower]

:D