Close Call

Close Call

A Poem by Chidoriflower
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So, a guy said he loved me, so I wrote this about him.

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Hey, that was a close call
He was driving me up the wall
Literally, the tension got high
I clasp my mouth, I have to lie
What's more? His heart or my body?
Oh, man I must be going crazy
Maybe I shouldn't take this too serious
You know, I'm just curious 
How will I erase the unbearable heat
And forget how his stupid heart beat?
If he loves me, he'll wait
Unless my pathetic poem is his bait
If he really, actually wants my physical "love"
Than he'll 
have to deal
With God above

© 2013 Chidoriflower


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Good....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

11 Years Ago

Thank you.......
test him to see if he really loves you. One test my friend came up with... if he can drive that is. Number one this will only work if he's okay with you driving his car. When your driving, dent it a little bit, not a lot, just a scratch. Call him and tell him you got into a slight wreck. If he asks if your okay, he might love you. If he asks if his car is okay, he's a fake. anyways, just a suggestion... great poem, though!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Rachel! Especially for the suggestion...:)
RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on February 8, 2013
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Chidoriflower
Chidoriflower

R.I.P, CA



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I love reading, from YA books to classic English literature. Writing is my vent usually. I'm gay as hell. I like food, anime, videogames, and traditional dances. (Like waltzing, salsa, west/east coast.. more..

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