Abusive "Love"

Read this if you will. It is not what you think it is...

Oh, bleeding heart, pouring intense rapture,

Burnt leather across fresh wounds, did capture

Virginity lost, massacred, burning fire

 Suddenly, useless efforts dire

Bleeding heart, a frozen touch tears flesh,

As if it were made of soft white mesh

Grinding fairy tales into the ground

 I thought "I am lost" but by this I am found

Oh heart, it hurts more to be numb

The pain is a spicy season

 Making philosophers silent and lovers dumb

 And an awful reason

 For the desperation of abusive love 

Author's Note

My structure is messy, as well as my rhythm. If you have anything to say, say it, my man.

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[Akashi]

Don't be too hard on yourself.

[Chidoriflower]

I must be hard on myself to venture toward greatness.