The War for Helen of Troy

The War for Helen of Troy

A Poem by Chidoriflower

Breathe in the ambrosia 
And the ache of last lacrimosa 
Fight in despair
Because you hate her eyes
And despise her hair
Lie in the blood
And give up righteous love
Woo with song
Because you must have her
Though you know it is wrong

© 2012 Chidoriflower


Author's Note

Chidoriflower
I would have liked to include more Greek mythology.

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Bold and brassy. Strong word choices and usage. Clever limeric. overall great job keep it up. I look forward to reading more of your work when I next visit this site.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i would label this write a triumph, it is cleverly worded and magnificently penned

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chidoriflower

11 Years Ago

Thank your for you kindness! I must return the favor by reading some of your works of art. :)
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

by your will, my friend

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Added on December 24, 2012
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Chidoriflower
Chidoriflower

R.I.P, CA



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I love reading, from YA books to classic English literature. Writing is my vent usually. I'm gay as hell. I like food, anime, videogames, and traditional dances. (Like waltzing, salsa, west/east coast.. more..

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