Trashing Poetry

Uh...yeah...

I take my fantasy

To compare with reality

And create a story

I hide my face

To cry about waste

And tear out page after page

I flash my passion

To show foggy confusion

And explode inner emotions

I write because it is my diary

A replacement for the facade

That is called "school"

Author's Note

Be as critical as possible!

Reviews

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I precieve a greatness in your words. Something is holding you back. Perhaps you believe the creation comes from you and this kindles a little feeling of inadequacy.
I prefer to believe the creation comes through me. My inadequacy is not relevent. The creation will show me the way. My struggle is to keep from interjecting my mind instead of my heart.
I have a story on W.Cafe called - " Writing Addiction? " It explains my struggle with and love of words. Though we are all different a seperate reality adds prospective.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank your for your honesty...I am extremely grateful for your review.

[Horizons]

Writing's we know the truth of our inner feelings, what we feel we just dig that all into the words of peace. We take a long hour rest writing some stuffs, writing always gives some joy and of course it's a realization of Truth. That's all i got, once again you've done a great job, nicely penned write. I love the write. By the way, i love the ending too... lol well done!

[Chidoriflower]

Thanks! :)

[Horizons]

Welcome! ;)

[symmetryAsymmetry]

You know what's best about what you write? It makes me feel like the words come from the heart...they seem to convey actual feelings...this authenticity, for me, is most important.

[Chidoriflower]

:) Thank you!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

The first stanza: reveals prospective postulation.
The second: speaks to seeking perfection.
The third: timidity, loosing the floodgates.
The forth: Compulsion and experimentation.

[quinfinn]

i don't think i have a criticism for this write. it speaks profusely of the torment of expressing innermost emotions and carries the message nicely. well written!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you! :)