Rejected Love

Mist envelopes your tall, dark form

Eyes as black as night

Nothing devours it, not even the worm

In this void you are the light

The ground drinks my bloody tear

While I scream your name

Only you could hear

My love for you is still the same

The moon rises as I fall

And suddenly I realize when you smiled

 You did not care for me at all

Reviews

[symmetryAsymmetry]

Love hurts...love heals.
After reading a number of your poems, I have to say, you write very well...i'd love to read more...

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you ever so much!!! :D :D :D

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This poem is wonderful. It is stirring with emotions from the deepest fortress inside us all. Here the connection to our most guarded underbellies is laid bare. BRAVA!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you for your graciousness! :)

[Bluefire]

Amazing! *.* I love the word choice and the flow of this poem, as well as the picture it conveys in my minds eye.
Well done! ^^

[Chidoriflower]

Thanks!

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^