Uchiha Massacre

This is based on the Uchiha Massacre, from the manga and anime, Naruto.

Blood stains tatami

Terror surges up his heart

Red eyes hypnotize 

Reviews

[quinfinn]

quick fix.....remove "the" from line one.....then you'll have a true senryu (haiku is about nature) and by the way, i think it is superb!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you! :) I feel honored for you to review this!

[Catheryn]

The first one is 6 syllables . . .this is a haiku right? o.o

[Chidoriflower]

Heh sorry. This is a haiku. I'm just inexperienced. :P

[Catheryn]

XD Lol. Its kay~ XD

[Akashi]

Hi, my two best friends,
I am reviewing Uchiha Massacre for Chidoriflower,
I think that you wrote it great!