Adam & Eve

The Garden of Eden

is not necessarily

the Garden of Hope.

The Wisdom

that had usually

kept me sane,

left me with grief and pain,

and without you,

my heart was broken in two.

Reviews

[Philip Gaber]

Thank you for your review, Lisàsview. That was good

[Lisasview]

Spent way more time reading about your life than it actually took me to read your poem...and I see that you mainly write stories...
One never realises what is going to happen to them when they are young.. So many twists and turns... Mostly sober??? how is that possible...
Anyway the long and the short of it is that I did enjoy your poem...
Take care,
Lisasview, now in Spain