looking black upon me

looking black upon me

A Poem by Philip Gaber

Portrait of an elated girl with a constellation of freckles adorning her face, hued tanned skin, and amber eyes like polished gemstones, strands of peach hair cascading over the shoulders, nestled within a mountainous forest ambiance, donning blue jeans and a top, bathed in the soft, octane rendered golden glow of sunlight streaming through the dense canopy, anime stylization with exceedingly fine lines,

She smokes cigarettes while

doing deep-breathing exercises.

 

Drinks coffee in order to

reach her target heart rate.

 

Has a way of whispering without

sounding like a conspirator.

 

Is the only one I know that

doesn’t look like a fraud whenever

she’s walking in the rain.

 

She once told me,

“There are two things you should never,

under any circumstances, do,

while in the company of a woman:

make eye contact with her after

she’s stuffed her mouth full of food

or look directly at her when she’s

wearing sunglasses.”

 

She and I tried to make a go of it

back in 90’s, but she said she didn’t

like “funny, sulky men…”

 

Shortly after we separated,

I received a postcard from her

from San Francisco.

 

She was dating a man who was said to be

on “intimate terms” with her “G-Spot.”

 

Her “God-Spot.”

 

I never knew such a spot even existed.

 

I guess that’s why she tried so hard to convert me.

 

 

 

© 2024 Philip Gaber


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Just between you and me, you can touch it with your finger. It's in a curve on up inside a ways. Kinda like a female prostrate. It initiates the 'squirt orgasm'. It's happened to me a few times but mostly when I'm not even thinking about it. And always when I'm all by myself.
Your story here is good but something is not quite up to your 'style'. Idk. It's ok. I like the picture (:

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Philip Gaber

1 Month Ago

I get feelings like that after finishing something.
Philip Gaber

1 Month Ago

Sometimes, the all-alone experience is better.



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Just between you and me, you can touch it with your finger. It's in a curve on up inside a ways. Kinda like a female prostrate. It initiates the 'squirt orgasm'. It's happened to me a few times but mostly when I'm not even thinking about it. And always when I'm all by myself.
Your story here is good but something is not quite up to your 'style'. Idk. It's ok. I like the picture (:

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Philip Gaber

1 Month Ago

I get feelings like that after finishing something.
Philip Gaber

1 Month Ago

Sometimes, the all-alone experience is better.

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Philip Gaber
Philip Gaber

Charlotte, NC



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