Well penned. Without going the inner child route, I don’t think this speaks to that angle, to me, boy/girl/child refers to innocence, maybe unrealized, but innocent on most considerations. The “paper route” is a good analogy to life, a simple labor, out in the world, reading of far away events that don’t age well over time, before the innocent even leaves his neighborhood. Again, well penned.
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6 Months Ago
I was thinking of innocence when writing this. Children are the best examples to use as a metaphor f.. read moreI was thinking of innocence when writing this. Children are the best examples to use as a metaphor for that...even though it's not completely a metaphor because there's more innocence in children. Sort of their default, right?
"the corrections outnumber the facts." Hyperbole, to be sure, but it hit home with me. Mistakes have become quite common in my hometown paper. Gives me the feeling someone is asleep on the bridge.
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6 Months Ago
That's a good comment. They all make all kindsa mistakes, but when it's national, shame on you, moth.. read moreThat's a good comment. They all make all kindsa mistakes, but when it's national, shame on you, mother******
Well penned. Without going the inner child route, I don’t think this speaks to that angle, to me, boy/girl/child refers to innocence, maybe unrealized, but innocent on most considerations. The “paper route” is a good analogy to life, a simple labor, out in the world, reading of far away events that don’t age well over time, before the innocent even leaves his neighborhood. Again, well penned.
Posted 6 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Months Ago
I was thinking of innocence when writing this. Children are the best examples to use as a metaphor f.. read moreI was thinking of innocence when writing this. Children are the best examples to use as a metaphor for that...even though it's not completely a metaphor because there's more innocence in children. Sort of their default, right?
I hate writing biographies. I was one of those kids who rode a banana seat bike and watched Saturday morning cartoons and Soul Train. But my mother would never buy any of those sugary cereals for us k.. more..