The Reason, You.

The rain saves me.

I've stood in the rain
Yes, The pouring rain.
Letting it wash, Wash away.
The pain.
The pain you caused.
It's broken now.
The thing you could of fixed.
Shattered, everything.
Here in the rain, So very mixed.
Mixed up on the inside.
No one can see, See the tears
As they fall.
Reminding me of my fears.
So many fears.
Haunting my dreams.
Turning to nightmares.
For the one main reason
The worse reason of all.
Y O U.

Reviews

[Bev]

I can see myself there, well I've been there, not literally really. I understand it, feel it completely.

[FrikinFrancesca]

D; REVIEW.

[Hotel Mornings]

Strong poem. The flow is nice and the emotion is obvious. There is also strong imagery which I love. This isn't much of a critical review, ha. good job.