Casted Away

It is sad but it shows the emotions of how it feels to take a break up hard. Or anything really dealing with someone who means alot.

I am being torn into two
Right down the center.
My heart is being casted away.
Buried deep under my lost hope.
Water is streaming from my eyes.
Leaving lines down my cheeks.
My hands are reaching out to you.
Only to feel nothing but the air.
My feelings for you seemed so real.
Foolishly thinking you felt the same.
I dislike myself for falling more in love with you.
Your chasing her, yet I am chasing you.
No one seems to be chasing me.
Falling even more into my own darkness.
My soul is breaking.
Shattering to pieces.
I want to be caught and saved.
No one seems to be my hero.
Lying down waiting for the remaining seconds.
Dreaming for you to hold me soon.
I scream out your name and sink away into the darkness.

Reviews

[Cinu~]

._.; they're not that good...honestly i thought they sucked unless read with yours....and yeh you sorta did.. heh. I dunno. I guess I just decided "Hey...I'm gonna make poems, like chibi....infact..." Yeah..
How were the others? I'm gonna post one myself soon ^-^

[Bre]

wow i really loved reading that poem
it was like a shorter version of the one i just wrote about my ex
i feel the same way you do
its like your chasing the person you love while their to busy chasing the other person
i really liked it you have talent and it showed emotion like no other lol keep it real

check out my poems please