The Real Me.

Dealing with finding the real you and anxiety

Can I shut my eyes?
Can I close my ears?
Try to hide myself.
Can I try to escape from the pain you apply on me.
Running away from the pressure thrown on so deeply.
I want it to be erased.
I don't want it to build up.
I'll drown in the sea of my own anxiety
If I trip?
When I fall,
Will it catch up with me?
And swallow me whole.
Haunting me down to the core.
I'll fail in the shadows
But succeed in the light.
Maybe the fake-ness of it all will be plastered.
Like a red x on my soul.
Showing how real I really am.

Reviews

[BenightedWhispers]

This is good. I enjoyed it. There are a few grammer and spelling mistakes, but other than that, this is great.

[alyssa]

i know how u feel.. it's very good!

[Bre]

*jumps up and down clapping hands* bravo bravo bravo lol i agree with the dude down there lol


psst guess what......

you owe me a new review lol *evil laugh* lol

[Leran Vakem]

A very good and wonderful piece this. I have to disagree with Rion. The feel I get from reading this with no breaks, makes one feel like when you really do soul searching. There isn't any breaks in life and when you want to search for youself, life just seem to go faster

[Rion]

So many different emotions in one short paragraph.
I don't even know where to begin.
So I won't. :P
I'll just finish.
Great work, but I don't like how it all...flows continuously, and doesn't...have...any breaks.
other than that, it's really good.
Rion

[J.D Mims]

That is really deep my midget Neko a.k.a "Chibi"! =D