Your Fate

Your Fate

A Poem by Chianne Grenier

If you had an hour glass
to tell you when you'd die,
without doubt,
would you smash it to pieces
or let it run out ?

If there was a timekeeper
Somewhere up high
Looking down, deciding fate
Would you bribe him with your riches
or wait until it was too late?

Life is dust in the wind
Love is a rose
It will suffocate
or cut you
If you get too close

So run as fast as you can
Away from this place
Or you may actually have to
live up to your fate

If God was a person
just like you
who lived right next door
Would you give a cursory nod,
a smile?
Or would you offer so much more?

Life is dust in the wind
Love is a rose
It will suffocate
or cut you
If you get too close

So run as fast as you can
Away from this place
Or you may actually have to
live up to your fate

Because there's a someday for everyone
And it's never too late



© 2010 Chianne Grenier


Author's Note

Chianne Grenier
More lyrics to a song than anything..

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I really liked it. Reflecting on it i can say that life does not require us to be consistent, cruel, patient, helpful, angry, rational, thoughtless, loving, rash, open-minded, neurotic, careful, rigid, tolerant, wasteful, rich, downtrodden, gentle, sick, considerate, funny, stupid, healthy, greedy, beautiful, lazy, responsive, foolish, sharing, pressured, intimate, hedonistic, industrious, manipulative, insightful, capricious, wise, selfish, kind or sacrificed. Life does, however, require us to live with the consequences of our choices

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really liked it. Reflecting on it i can say that life does not require us to be consistent, cruel, patient, helpful, angry, rational, thoughtless, loving, rash, open-minded, neurotic, careful, rigid, tolerant, wasteful, rich, downtrodden, gentle, sick, considerate, funny, stupid, healthy, greedy, beautiful, lazy, responsive, foolish, sharing, pressured, intimate, hedonistic, industrious, manipulative, insightful, capricious, wise, selfish, kind or sacrificed. Life does, however, require us to live with the consequences of our choices

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree. These do seem more like lyrics to a song.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I just.. love to write. I am a fifteen year old girl who has always loved to express myself through words.. it's the only way I can, really. I have not an artistic bone in my body.. so I paint with wo.. more..

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