TimeKeeper

TimeKeeper

A Poem by Created Unfinished

In the wilds, the aging slows.
Time has no ground to stand.
It bows to nature and the sun alike.
Death bleeds into birth where none are lost.
Away from here is where it moves.
The markings of individuals keep time quite closely.
In this mistake, lies the death of the many.

© 2019 Created Unfinished


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Very well -
Quite a loaf of words along with the goblet of feelings have you cum up with. Pretty much enjoyed reading this creative art of your work, esp. the line you mentioned: "Time has no ground to stand." So true.. and legitimate and philosophically upright. Looking forward to spend some time with the loneliness of your work by now. Cheers, Miss Unfinished.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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