Stargazing

A Poem by Created Unfinished

Stars Divide,
Hours collide
I'll see you today.
I'll leave you tomorrow.
Far away,
Our dreams have died.

© 2016 Created Unfinished

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Sami Khalil

"Far away,
Our dreams have died."

Very well written and conveyed to get the maximum effect...:)..............

Posted 7 Years Ago

Relic

When you wish upon a star.....

I see the correlation between the last line and the line I wrote above. Things happen over time and that's just the way things go.

Nice poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gray	I like it. The two correlate with each other. Posted 8 Years Ago I like it. The two correlate with each other. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 20, 2016
Last Updated on May 20, 2016
Tags: Love, dreams, sadness

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Created Unfinished

TN

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I live for the words that give my life meaning. Relationship: Taken PS4 @ Cheyzard I'm always looking to improve my writing so please comment. I will try to go through all my read requ.. more..