Rage

Rage

A Poem by Created Unfinished
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I've been feeling angry for awhile now.

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If rage is a fire,
what is my ice storm?

It is the storm of winter that blisters slowly
snow is light until it turns to ice
a crack in composure is a fall into cold waters
shivers are just the beginning 
hail the ice storm that turns the fires into a season. 

© 2016 Created Unfinished


Author's Note

Created Unfinished
Any critiques are welcome

*****UPDATE******
I recently won first place in a poetry contest with this poem so thanks to everyone who reads my work and posts comments.

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Added on November 11, 2015
Last Updated on February 19, 2016
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