little angles

My brothers Austin and Dakota you are such awesome poeple up  in heaven
I don't know why you had to die.
You  two were so cute as a little boy,
You smiled at us and brought us joy.
Even though we never say each other

I'm glad those times, were only a few,
Our hearts are broken, as you know,
We really can't bear to let you go.
We wish so much that you were here,
And now my poem will come to an end,
Until the day we meet again,
I pray that you are now at peace.
I know you are good angles

 Love you big sister 

Reviews

[M.Babu]

Aside from the grammatical errors i feel that there is something lurking in your words.
"Until the day we meet again,
I pray that you are now at peace."

The longing in your voice is so tangible and real the emotion itself is amplified. I think that you should continue writing my friend, and you will definitely grow more!

Great attempt at this!!!