more than me.

Hold me till I die
If only in
Poisoned memories
Regardless of your hands

Author's Note

I don't know why....blame Ed, his works inspire others.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Sort of reminds me of that song, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-_WDG8iLT1o sort of like Bono had a hand in writing this.

[Steve]

whoa.....

This is interesting...and perplexing. Sounds really sad.

[Nobody.]

really good. the last line is the magic that makes the other three lives live and breathe. Very cool.

[J.Black]

I like J.W's review- I have to agree with "Wow" and "Powerful" - it's always hard to have something let go of you- but those memories will forever haunt.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we may accept less. But the secrets poison memories will come back to haunt us. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[OT]

woah short but packs a hell of a punch!! very strong writing - the last line is brilliant - leaves it open and vague - nice!

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

wow. wow. wow. this is such a powerful piece. that enigmatic last line just makes me want to applaud. i literally just sat there a moment, blinking, after both the 1st and 2nd read..

[Crowley]

I don't think I have seen you write this short before, hella good. Some of the most powerful points are made in small packages and this is no exception. great job, damn that Ed Hart, the inception of many a great poem.