Blue Hope

Cinquain poem I was required to do for school.

Dream pools

Silence is fine

So long as I can dream

Fall into those pools eternally

Blue hope

Reviews

[Crowley]

I am not just going to fall into them, I am going for a swim. This really has kind of a supernatural almsot eerie feel to it . I love it , as a matter of fact, this one has really got me thinking about alternate realities.

[child-of-promise]

pretty sure this is the one we stuck in the corner so that, sadly, no one could read it...

it's lovely, love :)

[Saturn's Lover]

quite lovely