His Invisible Admirer

Beautiful blue eyes
Red curly hair
When will I ever be free?
I'm wrapped up in your perfection
It's getting hard to breathe

Everywhere I look is you
Your kindness and intelligence

If I knew what love felt like
It would be this
Although this may be one sided
You don't know I exist

You're simply adorable
I admire you in every way possible
Yet you don't even try

Perfection may be a disease
On a nation
But you wear it well

Author's Note

Much less dark than my other ones

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Awww this got us off to a good postive start yet and I feel this with beauty though I understand that given the context not ideal. Your intoxicating feelings for him are unreciprocated apparently becuase he doesn't know. And then you are concious of this no dreams have been laid and even then you declare that "The perfect is the enemy of the good".

Still your imperfect situation was told flawlessly

[Cheyanne Jordan]

Thank you very much, I doubted that this particular poem was as good as my others at first. You put my doubts at ease. I didn't want to make it too cheery, but at the same time not too dark either. I'm so glad you liked it!

[little thoughts]

hmmm good one ! romantic we can say

[Cheyanne Jordan]

Thank you!

[Dancing_Elixir]

You are so beautiful and talented!! I love you. (Surfboard)

[Cheyanne Jordan]

Aw love you too! (Surfboard)

[I Am Svetlana]

This is pretty much how I felt in highschool. I liked all the cute, popular guys, but to them, I was just another girl. Not in their clique. Invisible. So, I admired them from afar and they never knew. I felt that even if I couldn't have them, I could still admire and like them, right? There's no law against that. Just seeing their faces, hearing them talk and laugh, helped get me through each tough day. Even if I never talked or interacted with them, they were always on my mind...and I love the title of this also.

[Cheyanne Jordan]

Thank you! I actually didn't come up with the title. That would be my friend, Christian Gallagher. He has a writerscafe too(: Also thank you for the kind words and understanding.