Broken Inside

Here lies a teenage girl,
with nothing left to give.
She wants to leave this world,
she doesn't want to live.

She's hollowed out,
with nothing left to say.
She wants to scream and shout,
about what makes her feel this way.

She wants to go home,
but nobody's there.
She's all alone,
and no one seems to care.

She's broken inside,
with no feelings left.
No place to hide,
she's broken inside.

Reviews

[little thoughts]

that is something like wow ! feeling are best described

[Cheyanne Jordan]

Thank you very much! :)

[Chris Micha]

You have taken a page from my life and eerily similar to your age in fact. I thought it bled with emotion and was haunting. I began writing to bled these emotions out and I hope this is what this does for you. Often times we have to grow up faster than we want to and it's apart of life, but use it wisely and to your advantage. I sincerely hope you continue writing and explore more avenues with it. I am by no means an expert in this but if I can help you in any way I will.

[Cheyanne Jordan]

Thank you, I was feeling like this at one point. Not anymore, I have great friends and family. I have a lot of love poems now so they aren't as dark as they used to be.

[Dancing_Elixir]

I love you pretty girl!! Beautiful piece, as usual.

[Cheyanne Jordan]

Thank you, and love you too!

[Dancing_Elixir]

also, i miss you

[Cheyanne Jordan]

I miss you too.

[Edward Lancheister]

nice words that imagery of desperation, sorrow and pain inside that result of brokenness. good writing. simple and bring the fact to the reader

[Cheyanne Jordan]

Thank you! Very helpful, and kind. :)