The Cube

The Cube

A Story by Bryttnie C.
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Life

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I was wondering in the Cube's maze.
I didn't know where it all started, or where it ended.
What was only minutes felt like hours, months, and even years.
Opening one door lead to another.
I thought till my mind could think no more.
I was slowly going crazy with every room moving and reshaping.
Breathe 1...2...3...
Thoughts of my mother gave me more strength,
Helped my sort everything out,
from beginning to end.
I am no longer held in the Cube's control, 
I'm finally free from this maze of torture.  

© 2011 Bryttnie C.


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this one is a work in progress.
I noticed the typo thank you for pointing it out.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Did you mean "breathe 1...2...3" ?
I can see that life can sometimes feel like that box that holds us and confuses. I'm not sure I'm connecting where being set free comes from, but I can feel the confusion in the beginning of this.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 30, 2011
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Bryttnie C.
Bryttnie C.

Pompton Lakes, NJ



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