Tempting

Your touch lingers upon my skin.

Your grasp so strong.

Your eyes so precious.

 

You lightly kiss my lips,

gently brushing yours against mine,

just enough for me to want more.

 

You look at me,

see my expression,

and you start to chuckle,

because you know you have tempted me.

 

"The best is yet to come," you say.

I smile, I blush.

 

You kiss me again,

this time more intensely

and with passion.

 

The taste of your mouth gives me chills.

 

Your tongue plays with mine,

as your grasp draws me closer.

 

The feel of your body heat against mine,

makes it impossible to let go.

 

But I know that we must part.

Next time will be better,

because you are,

tempting.

Reviews

[TheSweet]

A nice write that has the feel of a naieve lover finding someone of more experience. Which is always a fantastic learning curve :) Well done.

[shanemusic]

This is great! I really like the ending. It's a good catch. Very well done :)

[To be scene To be heard..]

Great write. Such temptation is irristibale

[Invisable_Girl]

i love this! awesome write.

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

The temptation at its best..................and the moment at which you part away ...... gets stitch to you...and for the next time to experience more passion and more glory :-)

[I'm Just me:)]

this is very temptingly amazing i love it but i think you need a different picture for it, its more than just kissing!