Nothing , part2

They see my expression-blank.

My physical appearance is there,

but mentally I am lost.

 

I am mind,

I am soul.

No!

I am just flesh,

I am nothing.

 

Smoke arises from the ashes that were once me.

 

The water I used to recieve,

is now only rain of muscular flames.

 

The life in my eyes is now gone.

I am emptiness with a face.

 

Still silent

and no-one knows of my presence.

 

My anger is yet to burst.

Waiting for that trigger.

 

My fears and pain are not spoken of.

I am not spoken of period.

 

That's just the way it is.

And their lives roll on.

 

This halucination crutially digs deeper into reality.

Author's Note

a sequal to my original poem "Nothing , part1"

Reviews

[I'm Just me:)]

this is better than number one,
keeps me thinking of some,
i love this write,
shows your power,
and your fight,
jusst know u r as beautiful as a flower,!!


a poem to review your poem ;) creative i know lol

[To be scene To be heard..]

just as amazing as the first one