Nothing , part1

They wonder why I'm upset,

but I speak in silence,

because no-one understands.

And, truth is, no-one cares.

 

My life is burning in flames.

And every once in a while I get spared a few drops of water.

 

I feel as if there is nothing left.

My life is being tattered away, piece by piece.

 

I hide my fears,

my pain.

 

I find myself stopping right before I throw a fit when I'm mad.

 

I keep all the anger inside.

I'm letting it build up.

I know it's not good for me,

but I don't know what else to do.

Reviews

[To be scene To be heard..]

amazing write

I really like this. I think that everyone can relate to those feelings at times in their life.. I particularly love the line "but I speak in silence" I think it's very powerful. Nice work :)

[E.H. Monroe]

you unleash it upon the bastiches that locked you up and make it impossible to regulate your own emotions. i get the bottle, we've all got one, but the world outside the bottle is a decent place. The second part of this could crack out of the place of angst and into the next step. whats one deck after this? make this the part one and unleash all those horrid feelings intoa pallete of emotive colors...yer young...you have all the imagination in the world..
nice write..lemme see the next one

[Chesney W.]

@ Cathy Wattam... thank you , i was typing really fast and ddnt realize the gramtical errors... and yea writing helps to release some of the pain...

[Cathy Wattam]

Ahh, sad poem. Sad that you have anger building up. Surely, by writing about it, you can release it? Getting out on paper what you are thinking is good in so many ways. Keep on writing.

Just need to point out a couple of errors:-

"because noone understands.
And, truth is, noone cares."
Should be "no one" or "no-one".

"My life is beig tattered away, piece by piece."
Should say "being".

[Coyote Poetry]

When anger is the way. Best to walk away and release it away from people. Few problems are fixed by negative words and actions. I understand this poem. When I get pissed off. I stay away from people. A powerful poem. Open the door to thoughts. A excellent poem.
Coyote