A Truth Behind Closed Feelings

 

My heart aches to be his.

My mind dreams of his face, over and over again.

 

His kiss still lies on my lips.

Our last time is etched in my brain and refuses to retract from my memory.

 

His voice has me weak to my knees.

His breath upon my cheek causes my body to go limp.

 

I'm not sure what to call all of these mixed feelings.

I suggest that I  shall find out in the near future.

 

His last days of this Hell is upon us.

He will be free as I have a short time left.

 

My parents fear I'll become broken by his existance.

I, however, believe he is my true being.

The reason I live through my very own Hell.

 

This is something I've never experienced before.

Reviews

[Jon Settle]

Truthfully I'm always a little biased about love poems because of what I've been through, but I can honestly say that I couldn't have put this any better myself. I related all too well with this story (which is probably why I liked it so) but honestly, although this brought back memories that were hard to deal with at the time, I truly enjoyed this.

[Chesney W.]

thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.. I'm glad that you connected with this writing so well, only means that you know exactly how I was feeling when I wrote this. Thank you again!
-Chesney Cheyenne (:

[pasdepoisson]

It's a classic paradox: your source of fulfillment is also the source of anguish. To be even more classic, this romance pits concerned parents against passionate youths. Well chronicled!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the description of falling into love and hoping for a hopeful future. I like the story in the poem and the way you led the reader to the strong ending. Emotion of love can lead us to good places. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!