I'm Changing Who I Became.

"No more piercings.

No more drinking.

Never any tattoos.

Smoke, and I'll never talk to you."

 

You say these words,

that's who I've been for a while.

I never would've thought I'd have to give it all up.

But you're worth it.

Baby, you're worth the world to me.

 

I'd rather keep my body how it looks,

instead of filling it with metal and ink,

if it means I can keep you.

 

Harsh chemical's like alcohol and tobacco,

will kill with time.

That's time I can spend with you.

 

You hate all these things that I used to like,

then you walked back into my life.

I'm changing who I became for you.

If I didn't care so much,

I wouldn't do it.

This is proof of how much I want to be with you.

 

You're making me become a much better person.

Thank you, JCP(:

 

Author's Note

This guy, I've known him for a while, and he just got back into my life. Little did he know that I had become a 'bad teen'. Well, he doesn't like those things I did and wanted to do, so, because I care for him so much, I'm changing my ways and becoming a better person.

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

J'adore. We all know someone in our life who we're more than able and willing to change for. We don't necessarily know why they're so important to us but they are.

[Chesney W.]

yeah, this guy means more to me than anyone else in my life(other than God), and I'd do just about anything to make him happy, even if it does mean this kind of stuff. thank you for the review

[junaid altaf]

i like people who smoke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that puff of brutality!!!
i liked the poem

[Chesney W.]

thank you..and lol

[junaid altaf]

ur vwelcome

[Sam Gregory]

This is inspiring tbh, maybe not changing for someone else but changing at will. Keep at it :) I'm getting a tattoo haha

[Chesney W.]

thanks...and lucky... :P

[ALittleBitOfEverything]

I hate smoking and dont drink, but I love tattoos and piercings, if someone cared for me so much, they would look past these little things and care for who I am inside, it's good that you want to stop the other bad things, but I wouldnt change the way I look if they didnt like the who I am on the outside

[Chesney W.]

well, see, I don't have any facial peircings or any tattoos, but this guy means way more to me than those things ever will.

[emmy bon]

nice work

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Muhammad Qasim]

atleast one of us finally suceeded!! nice work :)

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Tapher]

a sweet and simple little poem that means so much, i find it exemplar :)

[Chesney W.]

well thank you!(:

[Tapher]

anytime :D

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

Scary, a change made for others has no base of support. You must become the change YOU want to see. If we seek obligation and expectations in a relationship then you change who you are. Many relationships then break down because neither person is the person the other fell in love with. Besides if you truly love someone why would you want to force change upon them to suit your own ideals. Love is not a deed of ownership, its a journey that is just a lot deeper and powerful than most. I admire your courage to place such honest words and thank you for it. The courage you had to write this should provide you will enough ability to look at the things you want to change for YOU not for others. Well done

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

It's always good to change your bad habits for someone who's worth it. For someone who will stick around and help you on your road to breaking bad habits. You may miss those things, but one day you'll realize it was all worth it in the end. Great job!

[Chesney W.]

thank you!

[unshakenScene]

awe

[Chesney W.]

yeeaaa... (: thanks for reviewing!

[unshakenScene]

ur welcome