Love everlasting.

Your touch,

your feel.

You make me want to know you better.

 

Your hand in mine,

the way they intertwine.

This feels right.

 

Your lips,

just an inch away.

Your breath makes me want a taste.

 

The way you say my name.

The chills that run down my back.

This is the way I want to feel forever.

 

You move closer(as if that's possible),

and kiss my cheek,

then you kiss my lips,

then our mouths combine.

 

You touch me here,

you touch me there.

Touch some more,

if you dare.

 

You move your hand upward,

starting from my knee.

You take your hand away.

No, don't stop now, please.

 

You remind me that you must go,

and I begin to cry.

"I'll see you again tomorrow.

I love you so much. Bye."

 

I dry my tears,

and wave you off.

Your truck leaving dust,

that being my last thought.

 

I text you,

"I miss you. Why'd you have to leave?"

"I miss you too. Don't cry again, please."

"Why'd you have to go?"

"Look in the sky. Do you see the rainbow?"

"Yes. But, what does that have to do with anything?"

"I see it too. Close your eyes and believe.

Believe that I'm still there.

If you do that, then tomorrow will be here."

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Deepankar]

Really awesome......... It surely brings back the season of love feeling..... GR8......

[Chesney W.]

Thank you

[emmy bon]

sweet poem, more to a song lyrics, well done

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. Best days in a life when love is the goal and seeing another is your happiness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

thank you for reviewing

[Zachary_James]

`I love it, it's so romantic but so sad at the same exact time. The flow just makes it better great job

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Muhammad Qasim]

the flow goes really nicely .. i like it! : )

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[I'm Just me:)]

why did he leave??

[Chesney W.]

he just had to go, curfew or something..this isn't really what happened that night though.

[I'm Just me:)]

it happened to me but he didnt leave we went further ;)

[Chesney W.]

oh wow.....tmi!!!! lol

[I'm Just me:)]

not T-M-I its F-U-N :)

[Chesney W.]

well that's the kind of funn I'm saving for marriage,so go ahead with your little funn.. 'cause that kind of funn should only be with the person you will be with forever....js!! lol,, you know my morals

[I'm Just me:)]

i know and i know i am single i say f**k it and whatever the f**k i want XD

[Chesney W.]

okay,,, i can tell...lol,,, but you say "f**k" way too often chica...js!! lol and Logan knows my morals and wishes he would've done the same.

[I'm Just me:)]

awwwwwwwwww sweet well i have been cheated on and lied to so many times i just dont f*****g care anymore

[Hamza]

great piece of inspiration ..
the end was amazingly beautiful ...

--> hope is a bridge that stands between us and the desired ... never let it fall :)

[Chesney W.]

thank you(:

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

heart touching and fab :)

[Chesney W.]

thank you(:

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

mp :)

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

everyone has exactly the same feelings about ones love