"Life"

The pain is gone now.

Temporarily, hopefully permanently.

 

I'm new to this feeling.

But, I love it.

 

Not sure what it might be.

But, it numbed me.

 

Eversince I met you,

the darkened light blew.

 

They say I'm happier,

and I feel cheerier.

 

Whatever it is you did,

made me no longer feel like a kid.

 

Without that night,

I would still be in the fight,

that I called "Life".

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Funny how somethings can change our view on life and thoughts. I like the flow of thoughts and emotion in the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[TheJordBaker]

I like the way you've written this, the broken up lines structure just works perfectly. well done.

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[amarlaksh]

very true. Good write

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Zachary_James]

Interesting, take on life love it.

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Janice Fronek(red.panda..]

I like the way you wrote this poem :D

[Chesney W.]

thank you!(:

[Muhammad Qasim]

Nice poem ..

[Chesney W.]

thank you...why the dots?

[Muhammad Qasim]

No rezon

[Chesney W.]

okay then

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

nicely explained the feelings :)
keep writing poem like this..

[Chesney W.]

thank you!(:

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

my pleasure :)

[Chesney W.]

(:

[Hamza]

it's lively.. full of enthusiasm
it made me smile and hopefully everyone who must have read it ..
and smiling is life .. :)
great work and keep it going ... !!

[Chesney W.]

thank you!(: