I am sorry for your loss! But somebody said death is just a new beginning! Its another metamorphosis! "But those gone have a better place to live." You have developed an acceptance of this reality that many difficult to grasp! Nice work!
It does seem we lose the good people too soon. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Good to remember the kind people in a life with words and thoughts. A excellent poem.
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Yeah, I know this feeling all too well. I miss my grandmothers dearly. Thanks for sharing.
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no problem. Losing someone close hurts really bad.
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That it does. But really, death is just as much a part of life, as life itself. After all, in a sens.. read moreThat it does. But really, death is just as much a part of life, as life itself. After all, in a sense, from the moment we are born we are moving one step closer to our grave, each and every second. The hard part is dealing with the death of your loved ones, and accepting the fact that one day we ourselves will die.
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yea, youre right. you know what? we have had people dying forever, every one knows its coming, but y.. read moreyea, youre right. you know what? we have had people dying forever, every one knows its coming, but yet we still have not learned how to deal with it.
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Yeah, I don't think it's possible for us. Sometimes it really just doesn't seem fair that we are bor.. read moreYeah, I don't think it's possible for us. Sometimes it really just doesn't seem fair that we are born to die, but a lot of things aren't fair. Maybe there is more to life and death than anyone can imagine.
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maybe so.. but no one will ever know until they die. I believe that if you're saved, then you're goi.. read moremaybe so.. but no one will ever know until they die. I believe that if you're saved, then you're going to Heaven. so many of my family will be seeing me there walking the streets of gold when I die. Why do people threaten Christains with death? nobody can threaten me with death, because when I die I'm going to a much better than this place on earth. can I get a 'Amen' ?
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Well, as for a guy like me, I'd like to believe that things will be good for everyone when we die, m.. read moreWell, as for a guy like me, I'd like to believe that things will be good for everyone when we die, maybe even some people that many would wish the worst for: Osama,Suddam,etc.
Well...I presonally believe that God wouldn't throw any of his children into a terrible place like t.. read moreWell...I presonally believe that God wouldn't throw any of his children into a terrible place like that...Bible says he made that for the devil and his angels...But i guess that's a really big discussion and there's no real answers. I just think God - who is supposed to be our father- would never eternally damn his children.
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well see, when kids misbehave, what do you do? you punish them. that's why God sends some to Hell, t.. read morewell see, when kids misbehave, what do you do? you punish them. that's why God sends some to Hell, they have sinned and not asked for forgiveness.
This was very raw, I felt acceptance mixed with lingering anger. The lines read as statements or declarations and although simple in composition and language have a gravitas that you can sense from that unfiltered emotion. I don't know if I would say I enjoyed the poem, it left me conflicted as I understand the depth of it, but I struggle to empathise, not because I cannot draw on similar experience but because it feels so fresh in how it exposes the wounds of loss. I believe this is a difficult emotion for anyone to touch outside of the direct experience that causes them (unless they are experiencing events of a similar nature at the time of reading) because time allows it to fade to a different kind of hurt and to me at least, that pain is a different one from that expressed in the poem. I liked the poem though it certainly got me thinking :)
everyone will.. it's not just you.he is deeply missed by everyone,,even though these idiots in out c.. read moreeveryone will.. it's not just you.he is deeply missed by everyone,,even though these idiots in out class don't act like they do, deep down they miss him.
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yea i know but it really upsets me me and him were very close
Hello, I'm Chesney Wilkerson. I'm 22 and happily married to my best friend. Most of the writings here are stuff from high school, so ignore the immaturity of it all. I went through quite a lot while I.. more..