Melody

It starts

A steady beating

A pace at which we all may breathe

I close my eyes

This is life in all it's glory

The melody flows

I am encompassed

Feeling drips from my very soul 

Hearts swell

Tempo increases at the touch of a finger

The brush of a hand

Loss of breath

A running pace

What divinity is this?

The chorus is awakened

We dance as one

This is life

This is me

 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

As the universe dances with itself

[Emily B]

I love the dance

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. and you're so beautiful ... and you inspire ... this is magical and musical ... amazing, just amazing ...

[James Paulin]

I enjoyed the musicality of this poem. I have attempted to achieve a similar effect with a double etheree titled Metronome. Your lyrical composition is rhythmical and enchanting.