Ik mis je zo

Ik mis je zo

A Poem by Cheryl J. Turner
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Sometimes we have to do things that make us unhappy so that we can be healthy.

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Days of sun

Garden made to laze in

Schools of play

Massive Kriek consumption

Owning chickens

Skirts and wellington boots

Whatever the weather

The thrill of eggs

Play

Trips to the pet store

Rabbits galore

New shopping experiences

Food never before seen

Songs that were great

Bicycle rides

Summer days dreaming on the beach

Pools bigger than gardens

Barbeques

Laughter

Friends and family never fully appreciated

Love given in plentiful amount

Hideous decor

Coffee and cigarette smoke

Verstond je?

Ja, Ik verstond je wel...

Language barriers

A union

A promise

Disapproval

Life

Days of rain

Expression loss

Fear, irrational

Days of hatred

Anger

Tears

Discussions to be avoided

Puzzles abound

Answers unfound

Depression

Discovery

Understanding

Mental health

Recovery

Loss

Betterment

Regret

Days that are empty

A life whole no more

© 2010 Cheryl J. Turner


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the opposite of Happy is not sad....so what is the opposite of whole? all life experiences the loss of our "way we are" and change comes in..."change" is the opposite of Happy if we have depression...Journaling can now become "Happy"...well written and expressive in simplistic presentation.

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the opposite of Happy is not sad....so what is the opposite of whole? all life experiences the loss of our "way we are" and change comes in..."change" is the opposite of Happy if we have depression...Journaling can now become "Happy"...well written and expressive in simplistic presentation.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like a stream of conciousness - or a game in which we follow up one word idea with another.. It makes for an interesting photograph album and reminds that the variety is all... A neat write

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it happened so fast, i didn't feel you shift gears

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem lays out a mixture of different feelings and experiences. I'm not sure what brought on the later sad emotions but life is like that in many ways. Some days are not great for me and there really isn't a specific reason. the last line really makes me sad. I life whole no more. It says it all in that line and to me that is terribly sad when someone feels that way. This poem is a great heartfelt soulful write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 14, 2010
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Cheryl J. Turner
Cheryl J. Turner

Edinburgh, Midlothian, United Kingdom



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I am a self confessed hopeless romantic and hold not a shred of remorse for it. I love the idea of love. Writing, for me, is a release of emotion and a tool of expression. 'The aim of life is se.. more..

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