Santurce

Santurce

A Poem by Frontier
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About exploring an urban part of town, in Puerto Rico.

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Three steps from the train station and one is greeted by abandoned buildings covered in graffiti, lending them a still-life quality, ironic since it seemed they had never been alive. I set my gaze and my direction forward, in a straight line, and start walking, knowing that I had to remain extra alert to my surroundings. The monotonous hum of the cars allow me to absorb everything more fully. Suddenly I'm interrupted by a person singing with their windows down, splashing the moving picture with a dream-like quality. Her voice and soul seemed to be carried on by the relentless advance of the urban flow.

To my left I suddenly pass a small barber-shop, people sitting, waiting on plastic chairs, the looks on their faces; a strange mix of hopeful hopelessness. The abrasive sound of the AC’s jutting out of shops greeted my ears, as I walked by dark, dingy-looking “colmados”. An old looking cat appears before my path, looking a bit frightened, I was sure he was looking for his next snoozing spot.

To my right appeared a bus stop in which an old man was sitting, singing, seemingly more from custom than from conviction. At that point I was sweating and thirsty. I came across a place called Libros AC. Mostly twenty-something’s typing away on their laptops, guys and girls, dark-rimmed glasses, facial hair, white faces, red lips and black bangs, or what I’m guessing we call hipsters. I stopped to look at a rack, lots of comic books with quirky little monster drawings.

After refreshing myself I stepped out and kept walking. I saw a big pink building that said “Departamento de la Salud”, and yes you may have guessed, it was abandoned and covered in graffiti, and not the good kind. It was a bit of a shame, the only life at the spot was a big old tree in the corner, I could almost hear it whispering “I told you so, I told you so…”

© 2014 Frontier


Author's Note

Frontier
This was for an assignment for poetry class, to be descriptive about my experience.

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that smart tree, it has seen so much, and has quite the insight.

a real Tree of Knowledge...

your descriptions place us there...nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Frontier

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob :)
Be descriptive and keep it real... I've walked those streets too... countless places and times. "You touched it just right."

Posted 10 Years Ago


Frontier

10 Years Ago

Thank you Chris

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