You, the universe

With you I 

decipher

the mystery

of the universe,

because you are one

You are gone

gone gone gone

left for done,

No not me

I want you to be,

to be me,

and I want to, 

be you

while you be you

You are truth

that instant

when it's not 

light or dark

when love feels 

real and unreal

The time which

the diamond possesses 

is there

in your glance

in your step

in the vibration

of your voice

Reviews

[Horizon K.]

With you I
decipher
the mystery
of the universe,
because you are one...


I love this-- it makes me think of how we can fall so hard for another, that we become lost inside of them. If we are not careful, we might forget who we are, who they are, as separate entities. But if balance can be found, when two universes collide, they can exist parallel, yet intertwined-- be themselves, but something entirely new at the same time.

I love physics poetry.

[Sunya]

time which the diamond possesses :) beautiful :) well every line, every stanza is amazing :D i can feel so much love in the poem..wonderful

[Frontier]

I'm glad you like this one :)

[MoriartyMesa]

You are truth
that instant
when it's not
light or dark
when love feels
real and unreal




That was what sold me, not just those lines but what was behind them. Nice work please send me more when you have the chance.

[Frontier]

Yes, I understand! Thanks a lot! :)

[John A. Ayala]

I really enjoyed the interplay between love and metaphysics that takes place in this poem. What comes to mind in trying to describe it in a single phrase is 'separate oneness', an apparent contradiction that makes perfect sense to me.

-John

[Frontier]

Thanks John, I agree..it is one of my themes.

[Ian Gilmour]

I love this poem. It is written simply yet it addresses and demands paradox of the complexities of the need for human relations. "I am my brother's keeper, I am my sister's keeper" (The Latin proverb) comes to mind and your poem does an amazing job and capturing that idea and building upon it and extending past the basic notions of what it is to be connected with somebody. Continue to write regularly, I enjoyed this very much and look forward to your future projects!

[Frontier]

Thank you my new friend Ian! Yes I can see that phrase in the second stanza. Glad you saw stuff about the complexities of relationships.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

second stanza just blew me away...

i basically want us to be one with each other and one with the universe...
excellent piece.

[Frontier]

Thanks, Im happy it stirred you.