Anti-matter

The cruelest thing in the world
are parallel universes
While everyone is dancing
by themselves
In endless multiverses

I'm looking for
our anti-particle
Not to be found
in lengthy articles
Maybe it can be found
Hidden under
Popular demand
Please understand
It's not what you think
You have to bury
Yourself underground

Let the worms come in
Let the black rose sing
The coil is unraveling
Your skin starts traveling

Skeleton buildings implode
Ribs begin to erode
Exploding, procure them
Exploding,
The signs which hide
Within the tide

Let the anti matter sing
Let it dance
And set up a kaleidoscope of souls
Ancestors hugging descendants in
Storm-like transcendence

I can hope for
A parallel chance
Let the anti matter dance

Reviews

[Dean]

I think the anti-matter does indeed dance.
For the nonce, it is our key to the expanded universe we do not know. What could be better?

[Frontier]

Thanks Dean, and I agree :)

[Tree]

Such a smart, but at the same time, spiritual poem. I am drawn to any science or fiction or non or spiritual teachings that merge, these two. Meaning, the merging of spirit, and truth. The idea that energy can not be lost, but in fact only changes its form, might be where seekers can start to look for these answers... I was telling someone close to me the other night, that science might one day prove the existence, if not of God, then maybe, an after life. There are already some interesting scientific arguments for both of these ideas, though not mainstream. It's only a matter of time, science, and the unexplained, are on a collision course. Much like the poet's poem, which in fact did/ Collide.

Fascinating write.

Dpaz

[Rossen]

I turned inside out and joined your quest... deep dark and wonderful 100/100



Rossen

[Frontier]

Thanks Rossen! I'm very glad :)

[Wraith.]

Brilliant poem. I love how you write.

[Frontier]

Thanks Wraith! :)

[Eric Weick]

Damn. Sheer and utter horror. Thats all I could think when reading this. Ending it on a dark note was quite, lovely.

[Frontier]

I'm glad you picked up on the subtle horror :) thanks!

[Kayleen]

The opening to this is really strong. great themes! keep on writing!

[Frontier]

thank you Kayleen!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

Let the anti matter sing
Let it dance
And set up a kaleidoscope of souls
Ancestors hugging descendants in
Storm-like transcendence...as we can only hear of our ancester we remain hoping that they can just one day come and caress us,,,oohh what a good write. it is very rare that you find one writting about ancestors..thanx

I can hope for
A parallel chance
Let the anti matter dance.....ow my word, i love the flow of this stanza...

not sure if am right but i see a need to bring masses together in this poem. i like

[Frontier]

Yes you are right, it is a need to bring the masses and their masslessness together haha

read moreYes you are right, it is a need to bring the masses and their masslessness together haha

Im glad you enjoyed :)

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

i'll surely read nore, same applies to you:).

[Mister_Sir]

Wow. I really like this one. My favorite part is "Skeleton buildings implode Ribs begin to erode." My fearful fascination with death gives me an eccentric lure to those lines. I also like the lines "Let the anti matter sing Let it dance And set up a kaleidoscope of souls Ancestors hugging descendants in Storm-like transcendence ." "Kaleidoscope of souls," wow that just sounds so beautiful. I also enjoyed the poem's quick rhythm. It gives the work itself a dance-like feel. It's an overall beautiful piece, and I'm definitely subscribing. Keep up the great work.

Neurotically yours,
Mister Splitbrain

[Frontier]

I like the macabre image you came up with, yes it does have a quick, dancey rhythm! Thank you Mister! :)

[Aethereal]

String Theory says that everything is composed of dancing vibrating looped strings. We're not just dancing;; we are the dance. Of all the events that are possible, Consciousness only considers one at a time; one Schrödinger cat at a time is made manifest by Consciousness. Consciousness seems to be the goddess of our multi-verse. Each of us is a synergic dancing part of the Consciousness of the multi-verse, and the sum of all of our parts is greater than the whole. The whole is the immortal all knowing kicker.

[Frontier]

Thank you for your insightful review, Aethereal.