Cosmopolitan smile

That cosmopolitan smile,

 Diamond teeth behind blue # 2 lips, 

Designer chakras bought in a boutique 

 3D matte nails that popped a Pastille de Vichy 

Into that slippery forked tongue 

that had just slurped 

 liquid mahogany Kopi Luwak, 

to sustain this bustling nightmarish acme 

 My aura is a multi-colored Neon rainbow,

 Because I contain multitudes, 

And have ascended into a High-rise, pent-house reality

Author's Note

I want your impressions :)

Reviews

[Margo Seuss]

It feels to me like an exposure of all things superficial. Very nice. What did you mean by acme? Did you by any chance mean acne? I'm really not familiar with makeup brands and that sort of thing but Kopi Luwak sounds like some fancy sort of makeup brand. Some good word pairings here. "Slippery forked tongue," loved that! The person in which you describe so eloquently, has clearly had some serious modifications! Cosmopolitan Smile is a more than appropriate title for this. Wonderful!

[Frontier]

Indeed, it is about materialism and the superficial. No, I didn't mean acne, by acme I meant like the city is like the acme of human ambition and modernity, acme meaning "the highest point of something." Kopi Luwak is just some gourmet, expensive coffee. thank you for your review! :)

[Aethereal]

We see ‘em promenading down the streets of every city. They look so good ‘til you get to really know them underneath their Mercantile Status Quo. I was inspired to write this tiny gift song-poem for you. It’s in 1/0/1/0/1 five syllable meter:

Smile

Underneath her smile,
bright with Neon style,
she’s a crocodile
filled with yellow bile.

[Frontier]

I really like your song-poem! I may even add it and give you credit of course. Yes we do see them everywhere, and they are slaves to control it seems to me.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! You may do what you want with this poem as if it were your own since it's your poem that inspired it. It was quickly written as a follow up after I read your poem. Five syllable meter is he easiest meter in which to write a song-poem.

[Ambra Celeste]

I like the comparison between external beauty vs the beauty within which reflects through the aura. :))

[Frontier]

Thank you, there is beauty in the character, which is how she manages to control herself and the environment in order to sustain her "bustling acme" kind of life. :)

[Chris Micha]

Give me a simple woman, with simple tastes, but with a complex mind. This reminds me of a Paris Hilton. Very well put together. Great job.

[Frontier]

Hahaha thanks! Yes it does remind me of her too!

[A. Amos]

i love the feel and honesty of your write, simply brilliant

[Kleio13]

Damn.... i feel like i have surrendered unto your pent house reality. Love this! It has warped my mind

[Frontier]

:D Oh, you flatter. haha! thanks! It can be read as a sort of satire. :)

[Kleio13]

Definitely :)

[isus]

wow, i find this piece really amazing, i can't describe it

[Frontier]

Thanks! :)

[isus]

i'm really lame at reviewing things but words are not enough for me to describe it anyway