Darkroom

 

 

I am your soul’s darkroom

Only here will its

 

light

 sensitive

Photographic

material

 

manifest 

 

 

The negatives have found

 the formula

Here I am

The room that can be made completely dark  

 

 

 

Author's Note

feedback please!

Reviews

[RosewoodHousePets]

Awesome I like it. AT first I didnt know what to make of it, and than it captivated me and brought thoughts of my past forth and made me smile a crooked one inside. This Dark room holds magic and terror that can save the world or destroy... HooRA Frontier you created a script of dark lust and song that whispers with skill and silence into men and womans heart stirring there subconcious will into the direction of your choice.... The Dark Room contains your arts..>THATS MY MANIFESTATION>>>> I LIKED IT ALOT>>>>;) keep writing...

[Frontier]

thanks a lot for your manifestation

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for sending me this read request! Also I like the structure of the poem and the message you put across! Cool poem indeed 8/10

[Frontier]

Thanks, Jack. :)

[Chris Micha]

Interestingly dark and ominous but I loved it! Very good job!! :)

[Frontier]

Thanks Chris!

[John A. Ayala]

Your poem shows an awareness of the more subtle tonalities of the soul. It certainly left a lasting impression with such a captivating format very pertinent to its thematic.

[Frontier]

Yes I thought about the format and tried to make it fit the content, I'm still thinking about it though. Thanks for reviewing!

[Frontier]

By darkroom I mean where they develop old photos (black and white), the film negatives couldn't be revealed anywhere else.

[Wuji]

I do know what a darkroom is, though my interpretation had photography as symbolic to an art-form, the muse that drives an artist is indeed intrinsic like a negative of a film :P

[Frontier]

Yes indeed! thanks! :)

[Wuji]

This is poetry on reverb, I like how suggestive it is, layers of to me how art relates to identity and self-image.