The Ocean

How the ocean
Muffles my voice
A holy buffer

How the ocean
Distracts my choice
My eyes suffer

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

I, wonder what it is you see , I suggest you spit out the water and say something to the hoped for listener, he may have a receiving ear, it is, after-all, only a question....................

[Frontier]

Well, the sea lets one see everything and his own unique vision as one thing. I cannot tell you what can be seen there...

[paul sal.....]

Life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Frontier]

Hmmm so maybe life makes your eyes suffer?

[paul sal.....]

no!!!!!!! it lets you live!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Frontier]

Well my eyes will be my eyes!

[paul sal.....]

your eyes, by definition, see life and thereby, are life...This is something you must believe in. although life around us is depressing, is it up to people like us, to make a difference, help me

[Frontier]

yes that is why I'm here...to help...

[paul sal.....]

good night!!

[Frontier]

lol! Good night Paul!

[willweb]

Very well written, for such a short piece you say so very much. This poem was deep and easily felt by me. I enjoyed this today Frontier.

[Frontier]

Thanks for stopping by, Willweb :)

[kublakhan27]

You've said so much in these six lines, and left much to the imagination at the same time...I know these feelings though, having grown up literally on a shoreline...a good portion of my life, especially my childhood, was spent looking out at that ocean, pondering all things under the sun as my life took shape...you've truly spoken to me with this one...well done Frontier.

[Frontier]

Thanks Kubla, Happy it resonated with you :)

[Kleio13]

short, sweet, and dark. Lovely

K

[A. Amos]

Deep and beautiful expressions involve in your amazing poetry...great job my friend

[Frontier]

Thank you for the encouraging words :)