Wishes please hear me , will you ?

I wish I could let the sun in to my heart when it comes flowing down

overflowing with abundance and warmth and expansion 

I wish I could recognize the sun in my own heart and give to myself gladly and lovingly at fall

and not disappear in the the small dark mental health corners of my little mind 

I wish I could let you witness me, as you gently hold my hand and watch 

tears roll down my face 

and not feel small ,or guilty 

or confused 

I wish I could receive the small gifts you give

absorb them,

smiling as I bow down

and not  frown while  thinking

" i'm not sure how i'm meant to act here"

I wish I could  break free of conditioning

that my parents so kindly

bestowed on me

I wish they would just acknowledge

the little girl within 

to hear her ..

I wish I  wouldn't feel shame as I write that   

I wish the stars would stay forever in my heart

and not turn to  pain on  a cold night,

making me want to cut them out 

one by one 

with a sharp knife 

I wish I wouldn't feel a kind of pleasure as I write that 

I wish I had some more inspired words to write 

so you would like my poem better 

so I could get as stroke or two

She smiles as she writes that 

I wish I had a better ending but I don't .

"she walks across the hallway leaving her shadow behind her"

Author's Note

just let me know what ya think if ya like :)

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

wow...this is deep. and i like it alot...strikes many a chord with me...and many others I would imagine...you have great imagery behind your words...something that I look for when i read others poems...couple small typos, but good write i thought...:)

[~ Stefanie ~]

Wow, this is packed full of emotion. I love when I can read an emotional piece and picture myself experiencing the same situation or ordeal. That is exactly what you did with this piece. you drew the reader in and kept them hooked. Excellent job!

[Wolfwind]

Your words were beautifully orchestrated upon the page. They carried a smooth flow, deep sentiments and both the voices of the pen, as well as the mind in thought. I enjoyed this piece of poetry as aspects of it were things I've have dealt with before.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Walk away slow poet]

Such an emotional read, i felt passion in this write. Written so well

[Lily Mae]

This is fantastic.. I love it..xx

[Seshat Nidaba]

I wish that too and I feel for the author, I see a bit of me in them easily.

That sort of identification, is so much the source and result of good writing, of universal expression.

Half of art is the passion and yearning, of this you seem to have plenty!