Magical moments

When I fell in love ...( with a boy )

I cannot express in words the beauty 

that I feel 

when sharing a moment with you 

There is such an innocence between us 

it almost feels untrue 

It blows me away that life could give 

this little gift that is you 

That I may be a part of this 

a part of me and you 

Slowly slowly does the flower grow 

watching, embracing , I feel it's glow 

Just to be with you 

be with you 

The way we held each other

just only this  last night

was so beautiful 

it touched me deep 

right to my soul 

I've never experienced  

this feeling 

of what my heart has known so true 

So long I have waited 

of loving innocence you behold 

You are truly beautiful 

to the depths of your sweet soul 

Thank you for this moment 

divine it was 

God given it was sent 

and if never felt again 

with you ill rest my heart for keeps 

Reviews

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

This needs work I realize ... x

[zainul]

I adore your feeling of gratitude to God for awarding you a divine moment.
Very lovely piece.

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Yes well it really was :) Thank you for your review :)

[zainul]

You are always welcome.
It was my pleasure that I could review your lovely piece.

[Seshat Nidaba]

This was a very emotionally eloquent and precious write, I felt the radiance of the sentiments, as clean yummy rain!