Take me home..

Take me home ,take me with the strong winds
to carry me
oh please
hear my song

Im whistling
im waiting
im contemplating
to get to the place
where there is no pain

my brow looks down as I slightly frown
and again check in

I am here and no where to be seen
sometimes
standing with you on the street
walking in puddles
thinking in fuddles
projecting
pleasing
feeling tight
shallow breathing
lost in music
but the song aint sweet

dont always understand this world
or the 7 mirrors of my self
get lost in motion
getting caught again , in the wisp of the wind
in the layers of my skin

such complexity
such a timeless place
inside the mind
inside the I

and then theres you
and who excactly are you again
I met you in a moment
singing hearts
in a moment
and then darkness

such a strange world
strangers meeting in the dark
holding hands in the park



how do I know where to go
if I dont even know where to begin

Reviews

[~ Stefanie ~]

This was really good! The set-up was a little distracting for me, but your writing was so great it kept my attention. :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

BE CALM .. FIND YOUR PEACE WITHIN .. YOU WILL DISCOVER THE RIGHT PATH TO FOLLOW .. DECIDE WHAT IS BEST FOR YOU .. THE PLACE OF HEALING IS IN YOU ...

JAZZ ..

[CrushedPepperMinTCHrist..]

I like this "strangers meeting in the dark"
great!

[Break The Broken]

such complexity
such a timeless place
inside the mind
inside the I

and then theres you
and who excactly are you again
I met you in a moment
singing hearts
in a moment
and then darkness

best part, amazing all around though. keep up the great work!

[Joshua]

Amazing poetry. I especially like the last line. This creates a lot of very vivid imagery. Good work.

[Hoosier Belle]

love the ending, leaves room for one to think what happens.
like this. ♥

[Dahlia Phoenix]

We are never sure from where to start but I believe we just have to trust our instinct and move from there. The way you wrote this was simple but it has a great effect when people read it. Great job.

Also, the way you add videos on your "Author's note" is to get the embed code and place it underneath what you have written.

[KAREN]

I really think this poem hits home to many readers. I myself wonder where to begin or start, but that's life and it carries on. Awesome write!