Blood in my eye

Projections of unwanted responsibility,

has left me weak

the now w***e of my own mirage

no rainbows

in sight here  

dripping in my own flesh 

of hopelessness,

drowning

in my redness,

in my small hall

I carry the wound 

not that you can see  

oh withering flower 

you used to stand so tall 

so proud 

for the world to see 

oh what has become of you 

A tale of two halves 

and many dark magic's in between 

shattered glass, pins me down 

an anguished heart bleeds quietly

but lose my honer I wont 

I'm still here 

and i'll wear the crown 

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"Projections of unwanted responsibility,
has left me weak
the now w***e of my own mirage
no rainbows
in sight here"

A few grammar errors but its fixable. Other than that, I feel the dark potency from the way you express through your words.

Great job once again.

[Kyle]

Check the spelling on 'loose', i think you mean lose.

This is very powerfully written. You are an inspired writer!

[Stef Outsiders]

WoW this is strong, dark and cunning... 'anguished heard bleeds quietly' i like that...
My heart knows too well... splendid piece!