Nothing but you
A Poem by
Earthy Mumma Soul
A butterfly dancing her sweet tunes to me and the world if they care to hear her she flutters her glitter and pervades the air and my eyes too with imagination beyond my usual capacity im taken in to the minds eye the sweet soul my breath gets sweeter and my skin mellows in the dust of her heart you've been here before, havn't you .. she flys above and beyond, of which she is queen raising my awareness and shedding my old skins and in that moment I feel so alive ,engaged stary eyed I did not deserve you gave so much in just a whisper to my breath with you I am not dead ..
© 2011 Earthy Mumma Soul
Reviews
Lovely work.
Congratulations!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
one of my fav poems :) Thank you glad you enjoyed it x
This is damn good Zen, and sentiments to enable the pursuit of life's truth and her beauty.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is damn good Zen, and sentiments to enable the pursuit of life's truth and her beauty.
The changing of life .. observed and evolving .. A touch of light and sweetness to add JOY ..
I like .. Jazz
Posted 13 Years Ago
The changing of life .. observed and evolving .. A touch of light and sweetness to add JOY ..
I like .. Jazz
T his poem has a breathless quality about it.. the poet is transported by the image of the butterfly, the soft beauty that allures and engages the mind in visions of delight... bringing alive where the soul has been numb before...
Posted 13 Years Ago
T his poem has a breathless quality about it.. the poet is transported by the image of the butterfly, the soft beauty that allures and engages the mind in visions of delight... bringing alive where the soul has been numb before...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very sweet and Romantic , remind me my first ever poem , still here on the WC , "FLY" ... But in my case . I used the Bee :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very sweet and Romantic , remind me my first ever poem , still here on the WC , "FLY" ... But in my case . I used the Bee :)
This is really impressive. Its beautiful, enchanting and has a very powerful positive feel to it. This really is good writing!
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is really impressive. Its beautiful, enchanting and has a very powerful positive feel to it. This really is good writing!
Love it. :) Good stuff. Great imagery. Paints a beautiful picture and really brightens the spirit.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Love it. :) Good stuff. Great imagery. Paints a beautiful picture and really brightens the spirit.
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Added on November 5, 2011
Last Updated on November 26, 2011
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