God's World

God's World

A Poem by Earthy Mumma Soul

Salty wet tears from 
The seas soften my heart space
Make me whole again 

© 2012 Earthy Mumma Soul


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Excellent elegant heart-soothing senryu.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Earthy Mumma Soul

12 Years Ago

that's kind thank you sir xx
Life will be anew
With tears cried from the heavens
Death is but a dream

Was inspired after reading. Well done, thank you for sharing:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely Senryu on the comfort of tears - truly lovely comparison to the salty waters of the seas. I like the photo and the color of the font too.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2012
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